I think this is very good you did a great job at it i feel the same

This a really good one i feeel the same way, i how it is

Wow, this poem took my breatn away, it is truely amazing, your wording and flow is brilliant

i really do hope you keep it up
xxolish

It's written beautifully and shows your feelings. the ryhm is nice and the rhythm as well
and another thing i like
in different stanzas there're different thoughts
but you unite them by this repetition "everything"
keep it up))

Wow thiz poem is good
~my everything left me
tell me, what should i do
i made someone my everything
who didn't know how to be true~
and the lt line is my fav.
awsume poem 5/5