I Miss You

by Tim Mauntler   Oct 3, 2007


I miss you
Every second we're apart
It makes sense
Since I gave my heart

I did that purposely
There was no mistake
I miss you- Yes
But this feeling isn't fake

I have this feeling for a reason
It's not just there
It comes from knowledge
Knowing that you care

I'll always miss you
But it's nothing I grieve
I still have you
But don't ever leave

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  • 15 years ago

    by Hidden1

    I love this poem...I'm feeling this exact way at this moment. It's a scary feeling yet inviting to know that we can give our all to someone and they give it right back to us. What I look forward to, is seeing, touching, kissing, and loving on his when I see him again. I love this poem... Excellent

  • 16 years ago

    by Jessie

    The rymes are a little weak, not much power in it

  • 16 years ago

    by falln angel with broken wings

    Aww i love this

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Aww
    cutee
    for rhyming though
    try to be more idk
    complex?
    it might help your poem
    4/5
    kaila

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Aww...Another remarkable poem. A Very well writer and that is you! you have giving us/showing us there is courage to write. you have a talent and i will like to see more of your poems. The poem was beautifully well written. Again, great job. If you have anytime, stop by my poems are check them out. Well now, Have a wonderful weekend.

    -Sarah A.

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