Perfect 5. i loved it!

Indeed perfect! A perfect love poem by you!

5/5 Ingrid

I was a great poem i loved it keep up the great work.

Omg!! i freaking love this!!!!!! this is EXACTALLY WHAT I FEEL RIGHT NOW!! wow..and i don't say that i'm going through this to everyone, this... wow.. keep up the great work!

Good job, chico

Hey its good and i like it but in the line 'since i gave my heart' i would have put the word 'you' in there.

I luv this poem..and thx 4 da comment i hope u keep 'em coming..lol

I loved it 5/5
u rlly write great stuff :]

Aww...Another remarkable poem. A Very well writer and that is you! you have giving us/showing us there is courage to write. you have a talent and i will like to see more of your poems. The poem was beautifully well written. Again, great job. If you have anytime, stop by my poems are check them out. Well now, Have a wonderful weekend.

-Sarah A.

Aww
cutee
for rhyming though
try to be more idk
complex?
it might help your poem
4/5
kaila

Aww i love this

The rymes are a little weak, not much power in it

I love this poem...I'm feeling this exact way at this moment. It's a scary feeling yet inviting to know that we can give our all to someone and they give it right back to us. What I look forward to, is seeing, touching, kissing, and loving on his when I see him again. I love this poem... Excellent