Comments : Rhyming is gone, just like you-Abi's

  • 17 years ago

    by geeeeee

    The simplicity of this poem, being short with such little words made it so great. It was captivating and I enjoyed reading it.

    Take Care.

  • 17 years ago

    by nikki

    The sadness in this piece, of feeling
    left alone is just simply amazing,
    i loved how it all came together,
    nicely penned sad poem, 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This is so heartwrenching...so much melancholy and desperation were felt when reading this piece..and it's something that I can relate to.

    Despite being relatively short, the emotion in this piece is overwhelming, without being overbearing.

    Imagery was beautifully portrayed and your flow is just perfect.

    Beautiful.