Ouch! This one really gets to you.

"Slice by slice
It helps the pain
It helps to forget
To stop the rain"

These lines hit me the most! 5/5

Now i'm not usually a fan of self harm poems. they seen cliche to me even though i'm guilty of writing alot of them in my earlier work to. however, despite that i loved the emotion and depth you put into this piece. you captured the pain amazingly well. imagery was nicely done. i thought at times the flow seemed a little shaky but other than that i enjoyed this.

Wow! I love this peom! iT is so good! You can feel the emotion and it was written beautifully! Keep up the good work!

I dont really like the poems bout ppl cutting themselves but this one is different this one is cool, great job keep it up ur awesome at writing :)

5/5

Wow crazy this one really stands out. I am really impressed my dear. Its very poetic and very good work. Loved it all the way 5/5

Tc
Fsams

Wow. you really know what goes
through a cutter's mind. are you one?
i usta be, i have scars all up my wrists
and all over my legs, and no matter
who see's them, they still get scared away.
but this poem i loved. 5/5.

nikki

Wow I dont even know what to say but this is a really good poem keep it up.