by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden Oct 3, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Fear is an emotion from an unsettling event |
by Gasttlee
I've never heard of such a fear. From reading this and looking it up on the web, I understand it more. You've really done a super job with this! 5/5 |
I thought the middle stanzas were much stronger and creative than the others and in my opinion in should be up to the reader to find out what glossophobia means rather than telling them at the end. Personally I would have put more emphasis on the emotions and symptoms to give the reader an insight into your world. |
I think this poem is a bit cliche. maybe thats what's missing. I am a more abstract poet and I tend o add parts of nature or emotion to my works so thta might also just be my style of opinion. |
It sounds kind of ditzy the word glossophobia because it's like "glossy" which I take as a "ditzy" word, but that may actually be the word for the phobia, so yeah, good poem anyway |
Glossophobia?! That's kinda a weird word... I wasn't too fond of this poem... It was more like someone who was ditzy wrote it... It was ok in my book, but I'm sure other people liked it. That's just my taste... Don't get offended or anything. That's not what I'm here for... |