A few mistakes. Simple things like your and you're. It was an alright poem. I wasn't big on some of the stanzas but I enjoyed the last line. Some of the rhyming didn't sound...how should I put this...Well it just sounds like you couldn't think of other rhymes so you just went with it. I wasn't big on that. That's just me though. Overall I'd give it a three.

I got the gist of your poem and I rate it a 5

Aww! i love you too angel! :DD the only thing i didn't get was the defending part...and the hair part in the same stanza. But oh well. ur work of art! luv ya gurl