by JanaeNae Oct 4, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
When I see you, my knees go weak |
by Blissful
Aww. That was so beautiful and real easy for me to relate too. The last line just made me smile and it was a perfect way to end your poem. Well done *5/5* |
by Nowhere Man
Very sweet simple piece... It serves extra pleasure.. I love it... |
Oh my good the ending was so cute and rest brought a smile to my face nice job... :) 5/5 |
by IfYouWantMe
I like this poem...I know what you are feeling, I'm kinda in that same situation. I want to say it, but I chicken out. |