Superb Piece this.. absolutely Loved it

"..like a painter with brushes but no canvas.."

WOW.. amazingly done... what you've done with this piece is ..nothing less than excellent.. greatly done and awesome description ..the flow was uniform throughout.. great write this.

Keep it up

~Wake~

I've only looked at two of yuor poems so far, but I can already tel your style. Whether you are writing a short or long poem, you have incredible talent for imagery.
Your flow is smooth, and your choice of some words cathc the reader, making the writing more elegant.
I don't really have any advice, its fantastic.
5/5

Great poem ^^. Love it hun, as always :D. Muie aleia de tia dat 4...Keep on writing!