Educated parents

by Veamm   Oct 4, 2007


Educated parents

Loud mouths and concern tongues
sending a message on my ears
Life statements for the youth
involves the future needs

Lecturing, teaching a lesson
for the sake of enhancements
Directing eyes for the light
vending for your advancements

Giving more hints on reality
the life on this very world
Education for the educated
the only thing that we hold

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  • 17 years ago

    by Blissful

    Hmm. The poem started out shaky for me with the flow kinda off but the ending was strong. Again great word usage but I give it a *4/5*

  • 17 years ago

    by nikki

    I loved it, you really put into words what parents are, i usta hate mine and then i became one and you realize why they said it all. nicely written, very unique. 5/5

    nikki

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    The concept of this was unique and had much meaning behind it. I really enjoy poetry like that, as I did this piece. The only critique I'd give is that if you are going to rhyme a poem, have the rhyme scheme the same the whole way through. It seemed as if you were trying to rhyme, but the only verse that actually did was the middle one. Other than that, a great job on an original concept. :]

    Tammie

  • 17 years ago

    by DeadandBleeding

    I love the uniqueness of this, the use of language really works, it presents such a strong message so well.
    DnB

  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    This was an excellent poem to read. 5/5