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by RobinAnn13
Only issue I see is this stanza: When you see of what I really am, Please don't run away, cause I trusted you. And I let me walls fall down. In the last line I'm assuming you meant my not me...? And the first line confuses me, otherwise this poem was really really good. I loved how you started out using all questions and then started talking. My FAVORITE part was definately third stanza, the reference to a book. Awesome is all I have to say about that. 5/5