Black Star

by Wings Of Flames   Oct 4, 2007


The mysteries kept,
Hidden in masks of lies,
Maimed for you to see,
All my broken cries,

Forgotten in mists,
Unseen so unheard,
In eternal mourning,
Meaningless are words,

Fair is our skin,
But tainted are our hearts,
Lost in nothing,
As we fall apart,

My lips are aching,
Unspoken are we not?
Links forever lost,
Hearts you forgot,

Don't ever break me,
Don't touch me with your blade,
Don't call me your hero,
Because the black star will fade.

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  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow... I love this poem from the beginning to the end. I can relate to it in so many ways. You wrote it excellently, expressing emotions in a great way. I can't pick my favorite stanza, every part of this superb piece is equally good. Whole piece is very deep and touching.
    Keep writing!
    5/5 from me

  • 17 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    THe third stanza was my favorite. I thought overall it was a good poem. The flow and rhyming was nice and the title of the poem was unique and made me think about what that would look like. 4.

  • 17 years ago

    by Veamm

    Excellent!

    This one is kinda dark piece, Honestly i don't really get the picture of this. haha! but it is still a great piece!

    keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Wake

    An amazingly penned piece this...
    amazingly expressed ...very well..
    my fav. lines'

    "..My lips are aching,
    Unspoken are we not?
    Links forever lost,
    Hearts you forgot."

    greatly done.

    ~Wake~

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved the imagery you portrayed in this, it created very vivid pictures for me.
    Flow was undisturbed throughout, and despite being relatively short you managed to pack so much emotion and depth into the piece...nicely done.

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