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by NeferNoir Oct 4, 2007 category : Dark, fantasy / dark, horror
Pale lips, breathe the last plague. A solemn vow, will resurrect the dead. Whispered. Awakened. Poisoned placebo, will erase my emotions. Stare through the moon, with empty visions. Frozen. Numb. Whispered sorrow, filled my hollow heart. No more bitter feud, now we're far apart. Pained. Argued. Midnight weeps, bestowing a nightmare. Darkness reaps, a scar to wear. Cried. Worn. Swallow your whispered screams, as I drag you to your grave. I will erase your dreams. Saved.
by Jenni Marie
"I will erase your dreams. Saved. " ^^Holy crap...BEAUTIFUL. What a beautiful ending to such a marvouselly written piece. The imagery in this is breathtaking. Coupled with the content, concept, flow and wording, it all comes together to create a truly beautiful read.