by Wings Of Flames Oct 4, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
In these walls I am muffled, |
by Veamm
Excellent! |
Even though this is a sad piece it was beautifully written. It flowed smoothly and was almost soothing to read. I found the ending stanza really strong and your imagery so lovely. |
by nikki
Wow. very detailed, and loved all the words you used, they were descriptive and made the poem truly amazing. very sad and depressing, nicely thought of, 5/5 |