Wow. very detailed, and loved all the words you used, they were descriptive and made the poem truly amazing. very sad and depressing, nicely thought of, 5/5

nikki

Even though this is a sad piece it was beautifully written. It flowed smoothly and was almost soothing to read. I found the ending stanza really strong and your imagery so lovely.

Excellent!

it was a great piece! Lines were well expressed and it rhymes too. Too emotional piece!

Keep it up!