by my name is Llama Oct 4, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Shattered |
by xxSuicidalxx
Wow...I have never seen that kind of poem...amazing job on it! Very great wrod usage and even though it was short, had very strong emotions. Loved it! Keep writing! 5/5 |
by Jenni Marie
I don't recall ever seeing this style before, and while I think it sounds a little difficult, you have mastered it beautifully here. |
I didn't know of this one as well. |
by Vanessa
This is new to me as well, but it intrigued me, I love the word choice, it seemed perfect, and intresting at the same time, the vocab was great, the flow was flawless, the emotion was deep. again 5/5 |