This is new to me as well, but it intrigued me, I love the word choice, it seemed perfect, and intresting at the same time, the vocab was great, the flow was flawless, the emotion was deep. again 5/5

I didn't know of this one as well.
I also agree that this was a very deep poem.
I think you are very good in expressing feelings with such limited words, not everyone can do that.
Again a great write :)

5/5

xo angelique

I don't recall ever seeing this style before, and while I think it sounds a little difficult, you have mastered it beautifully here.

A heartfelt and touching write, done so with beauty and grace.

Wow...I have never seen that kind of poem...amazing job on it! Very great wrod usage and even though it was short, had very strong emotions. Loved it! Keep writing! 5/5