Comments : The Secret

  • 17 years ago

    by IfYouWantMe

    Very good...I like this poem!! I picked a favorite line:

    Couldn't you hear that awful crack?
    My heart breaking,
    As you turned your back.

    Wicked awesome...I feel the pain!!

  • 17 years ago

    by InuHalfDemon

    Thanks. Glad you liked it.