by Bryan Oct 4, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Her eyes are like emaralds, sparkling with perfection, |
An excellent phase obviously lol. I love this poem, it was very well written and the imagery was great. I hate seeing people go through what you must be going through, but unfortunately, life does that to some. I hope things get better for you and that she realizes what she is doing to you. Good job cutie. |
I loved the flow, it was perfect. |