I loved the flow, it was perfect.
You penned this topic amazingly.
I loved the whole poem.
Excellent work.
5/5
-Heather

An excellent phase obviously lol. I love this poem, it was very well written and the imagery was great. I hate seeing people go through what you must be going through, but unfortunately, life does that to some. I hope things get better for you and that she realizes what she is doing to you. Good job cutie.

5.5
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