Your emotions really pour in this one! 5/5

I liked the way u wrote this poem....it took my breath away....great poem....

The emotions are over whelming. the
way you express your work is truly
amazing. i love this entire piece but i
really loved this stanza

Knife by side
Gun in hand
I didn't love the ride
Now I shall be part of the sand

it was a powerful piece. 5/5

nikki