I love this. I don`t know about them others that downrated it, but I for one, love it lol. The imagery and wording was great, you do an awesome job at the style Hun, keep it up.

5.5
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I really loved this piece Bryan. The inagery portrayed was quite beautiful. Your word choice amazing. Why is this not a 5!? Well you know what i'll be giving it. Great style, gorgeous poem.

Well done. ~Mel

Bryan
Great job on this poetry form. Great Imagery.
Take care Cindy