This piece was nice. it was sweet and the rhyme was very good. The flow was pretty good too.
i wish you every happiness this world has got to give
and i'll soon stop thinkin of you cuz i too have to live!!

I think you meant to break your last two lines up like you had the rest of the poem with your rhyming words at the end...so that's my only suggestion. Just fix those last two lines.
:) Charisma*