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by ditzy Oct 4, 2007
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When u touch me my heart skips a beat, you are wat brings brightness to my day, your hugs make me feel like nothing can hurt me, i feel protected when ever im with you, you make my world better, i am myself when im with you |
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17 years ago
by *Charisma*
I think this is a sweet piece. The part about the hugs is very nice, it adds a little imagery to the poem. What could make this piece even better is to put it into stanzas, and add a few more thoughts to it...make it a little deeper.
Charisma*
