Melted My Heart

by Thoughtless Consideration   Oct 4, 2007


Fingers warm and brushing against my hand,
I've found everything I need; your eyes are my promised land.
A breath of fresh air in this school when I see your smiling face,
You're the best thing that's ever come out of this place.

Frowns diminish quickly when I read your words,
You make me so happy that I cry- isn't that absurd?
But your eyes twinkle so perfectly when they look at me,
Haven't you realized that you're the only one I could ever see?

You want some time, and I do too
I'd cross a galaxy and wait a million years, just for you.
You stole my heart and melted it with a poem and a smile,
Your laugh alone makes every thing in life seem so worthwhile.

You're my first thought each waking day,
[Please forgive me; I'm feeling cliche.]
You make me happier than I've ever felt in my life,
Now I no longer even have a proper excuse to cry!

Just promise me, promise me!
Don't ever say goodbye?

*edit: the boy this was about is pretty much out of my life now. wow. that's so weird.

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  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    This poem is so beautifully written, it sound so honest because you expressed your emotions in it greatly. I like the way you wrote it, and you did good job with rhymes.
    Keep up!

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    So pretty. it's kinda different from your average love poem because you put things differently. You don't say things the same old way. I LOVE your fourth line. Makes the whole piece have a good feel to it. Nice job!
    Charisma*

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