So pretty. it's kinda different from your average love poem because you put things differently. You don't say things the same old way. I LOVE your fourth line. Makes the whole piece have a good feel to it. Nice job!
Charisma*

This poem is so beautifully written, it sound so honest because you expressed your emotions in it greatly. I like the way you wrote it, and you did good job with rhymes.
Keep up!