Love your title and main line throughout the poem. This piece is FULL of emotion and sadness, and power and just this whole accepting what you're feeling and trying to move on. It's really great!
Charisma*

Aww sad but yet so powerful. Emotions were specialy strong and ahh just loved it how so many different feeling you displayed!
5/5 Keep up! Amazing work on this!

A really deep and tearing piece ..

"..you're pushing me aside
like i mean nothing at all
how can you look away
when I'm clearly starting to fall .."

and the last stanza. .. just so heartbreaking.. greatly done..
Keep it up :D

~Wake~

Well written!!! Love this one!!! 5/5 of course!!!

Really like this poem...a lot of emotion. Keep up the great work 5/5

I really enjoyed reading this and its true :) never in my life i have i broken a promise nor have i made one that i couldnt keep :) i give this poem 5/5 :))

Nice job like it lots...i really don't under stand how people do make promise and then just walk away i hate it so much...the last guy i went out with said he wanted to be with me forever so on and so forth and unfortantly i belived and he broke up with me and it happend twice with him exept the first time lasted much longer then the second time....love the poem good job 5/5

Wow that was a rele rele rele great poem...i put it on my fave poem list lol!!! keep it up!

Fcuk. You write awesome poems.. Well, this is only the 2nd one I've read but it's great..
Can totally understand how in this poem youre talking about a person being selfish... You should meet my mum... And about the promises you cant keep.. Yup yup relate to that too;
5/5

Wow another great poem...you really expressed your pain, anger and frustaion very well. i loved it...yet another 5/5. and again one i can def relate to.

for every promise that you break
is another lie inside my heart
another scar to cover up
as i lay here in the dark

these are my fav lines in this poem...b/c they describe exactly how i feel right now.

keep up the good work

I like it.. i love the reapted title throughout the poem it really placed impact on it but at the same time it wasnt too overpowering.. a very enjoyable read 5/5