by Brittney Follett Oct 4, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
I am just a single white dot |
by Em
Astounding work |
by Mandy
I'm in love with you, stupid white dot. |
by Jessie
The way that you relayed conformity in this poem is refreshing. You gave it a form and stayed constant throughout the poem. Good job |
by Spirit
Question could i ues this poem for a class poetry project? |
Being a white dot is never really all that bad, unless the background your put up against is also white. then you become invisible to all that matters, the other colours outshine you, but the same thing can happen to any "dot" of any color - it all just depends on the background. Excellent work as always 5/5 GG23 |