A great write! beautifully done n it is true mum is the most beautful lady on ths earth.
keep up the good work.

God bless u

Again 5/5
I can really say that ur mom is really proud to have a son like u
nand ya everybody should love n honor their mothers

:)

~gIrL~

Awwww, Adel!!!
This is soooooooooo sweet! I wish my son would write me such a poem.
You mom is really lucky to have such a sweet son.
I love this poem, you did well.
Thanks for commenting to my poem, called "craving for you". For your information: the affair ended after I made the third poem to my muse. Now I have to go look for a new one lol.......
I will make you my muse for friendship poems, you like that, sweetie?

Take care, my little bro

xxsis

Omg i luuf it! I also like u have write about yoour mom I think is so nice that people remmber their parent when they write....they are good inspiration also. I almost cried at the end...im so sentimental and the poem is well done:)

Simply amazing once again. Your love for your mother is so well depicted herein and I'm sure that she must be so proud to have a son like you.

The last stanza was the heart of this poem and gave so much meaning and thought into how we treat our parents.

5/5