Lol feel free to use it in rl (real life) and give me any pointers. im just a bit bad at poetry =P

Dont forget to rate it!!!!! (ima get alot of ones =P)

Thats so sweet. nothing like that ever happens around me. but its nice to kno that it does happpen! i think ur a great poet!!

well compaired to my friends and me u rock at poetry! :) 5/5

Hey Nina here
I love you too! hehehe great poem
from down under too please read some of mine and leave a comment :)