OMG...This so great!!! No one has ever wrote me a poem before, and I'm hiding a little smeared mascara from this poem!! You are so sweet!!! I am proud to be your twin, and your blank piece of paper!!!

**Twin**

5/5. =]
i love this line :
'Hands that have held on for too long'
Really good.

Nice topic.. the title mirror is really interesting.. i like it.. nd over tht.. u express pain.. connect pain with evry part of ur imge u see.. gr8 wrk done.. the connecion u create is the best..keep it up

Oohh... i really like it...so deep and descriptive...Great job on this one! 5/5
Keep up the good work!!!!

The repetition in this poem really helps the reader to better understand your meaning. I have no suggestions for improvement in this poem, it's written creatively and your meaning is evident... great job!

I love this style!!!! love how you wrote it with the repetition and syntax!!!

awesome job 5/5

Great poem.. i love the way you repeated the first stanza again at the end.. i do that a lot in my poems.. very nice job.. keep it up.. thanks for the comment and the tip =)

Awwww! thats such a special poem! its really good keep it up x

I liekt he repitition in this poem. It helps the reader. Another great poem from you.

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