1 main thing ...
(apologies for caps i want to shout it)

I LOVE THIS POEM!

This has been voted for as a 4 ... INSANITY!

This isn't just a message direct from the heart of the writer - it (should) touch the heart of every single reader! This is about more than a single person .. this is a message to everyone that has been in a relationship that they shouldn't be in or couldn't get out of! I changed all the his to her etc.. for obvious reasons. This poem resonates in the very core of anyone who's wanted out of a relationship.
Beautifully penned.
Marvelously written.
Amazing topic.
Billiant read.
Nuff said!
[6/5] << No Typo
~Pete.

I got carried away and forgot to say ..

"If you second guess yourself, you'll sink."

Amazing line!

Ok I'll shut up now.
Another awe inspiring poem Charisma.

"above his influence she must rise" <-- oh how i adored that line right there. so much emotion and depth. i thought the flow was a little off in some places but you certainly made up for that with the overall piece. this was a beautiful heartfelt write and i enjoyed every bit of it.