by Pete Oct 5, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
On a beautiful, sun kissed, autumn morn', |
by Jackie
Excellent poem, well written and very descriptive. |
by xXxemzxXx
This is a beautiful and well written piece of poetry i loved how you used your words to explain imagery in more detail it waz a powerfull poem i loved it 5/5 |
by Cella Bella
This was a very beautiful piece of poetry. So deacriptive with a great, steady flow. I loved the last two stanzas , they were penned perfectly. A very powerful read. 5/5 |
by Robert
I loved the images and the whole structure of this piece I enjoyed the way you lead your reader through great job keep up the great work Plot121 |
by Melpomene
Oh my, what a truely amazing piece. The flow of your poetry is so smoothe, chant like. The word choice is deep and holds so much power. The length wasn't too long to me because once I started reading this I didn't want to stop. Descriptiveness was breathtaking you portrayed such great imagery into my mind. A nicely written poem. Well done. ~Mel |