by lexie Oct 5, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Oh baby isn't it beautiful, |
by firexdancer
The begginning of this poem was really beautiful, the description and flow was totally gorgeous and i loved it.....however, the last phrase ruined the poem pretty much with it's lack of sincerity (cheesiness) if i were you i would probably change that so it didn't affect the flow and beauty of your poem. |