Comments : Lily

  • 17 years ago

    by Ridge

    Diz means alot to me, a poem reminding me a precious preson whom i've lost.

    Sorry for the spelling mistake:"seelady"

  • 17 years ago

    by Nula

    I liek this poem...its good

  • 17 years ago

    by Phantasmagoria

    This is a song, right?
    Anyway, its good.
    I could relate.
    I know of a guy who got in a fight with someone, and after the fight the person he was fighting decided to kick his head. He had an unknown anurism(whatever) and his head basically exploded.
    Well, this poem reminded me of that and the entire life-death process.

  • 16 years ago

    by your loving sistertwin

    That was wonderfully sad...i love poems that make you feel, think...ya know- good job

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandraa

    Beautiful