Here Katie... I love the poem, and I loves you, so I'll leave you a comment: TO EVERYONE READING THIS. KATIE IS ONE OF THE BEST POEM WRITERS I KNOW AS YOU CAN SEE HERE. IF YOU DON'T THINK THAT THIS POEM IS EXTRAORDINARY, I THINK YOU'RE BEAUTY IMPAIRED... LIKE YOU CAN'T SEE GREATNESS RIGHT IN FRONT OF YOUR EYES! Katie, that was awesome, and nearly made me cry. Please write more, Your Loving Best Friend, A.H.H.

I've been trying to write a poem like this. You express it pretty well, though. 5/5

Great poem, I really liked it....keep writin!!!

Great poem, I really liked it....keep writin!!!

This is a fantastic piece of writing and i really enjoyed reading such a piece of work. I think that you should try publisize this poem by asking people to read it on here

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/discussion/list.html?topic_id=1453

put your title on there and tell people a little about yourself and more people will read this piece xxx alex xxx

Okay. i loved this. the depth and meaning in this piece are beautifully portrayed. flow is good for the most part, with an insanely great message behind the written words. beautifully and elegantly written.

Amazing poem! A joy to read! This has a special meaning to everyone...cause everyone has choices to make. Love the poem!

It was a very powerful poem, you wrote it so beautifully, and again the imagery was over whelming, i had a perfect picture in my head.
nice work 5/5

Well at times this poem was really powerful and it was incredible to read then at other times you kind of trailed to the side but then regained it again and it was kind of a pattern like that throughout this poem for example a good line was
To forgive and forget or to keep that grudge
To loose that weight or keep the pudge
To listen to your parents or rebel
To slack in school or excel
but one of your poor lines was
To fight for it all or back down
To maintain that smile or frown
To love somebody no matter what or let that little green monster eat you up inside
To stand up or try to hide
but i thought it was good overall so 5/5

Every choice that you make, you have to live with
Good comes out of mistakes, that is not a myth

Wow superb poem. Loved this line. 5/5 all it the way. :)

I hate choices. but mostely cause they are every where. the biggest decision i ever made was whether to move in with my dad who lives clear across the US from me! but i love the poem. its VERY good!

I simply love this piece! Not only is it an ingenious idea but it is incredibly well written. The flow got shaky at times, but you gracefully grabbed it by the ears and reined it in.

I truly love the bit with the choices in it, it not only lets the reader into the state of mind you were in at the time of creative inspiration .. but it also forces the reader to think these choices for themselves!

I would really really like you to PM me with regards to this poem, being a senior member I want to nominate this poem for contest entry .. I just feel it needs maybe 2 lines slightly altering.

As I'm sure you have gathered I LOVE this piece.

~Pete.

I love the editions, really improves the overall flow of thhis piece.

[Nominated]

Excellent poem!!! i really like the message your getting across here.....it's the choices we make that effect the outcome of the way our life is gonna end up....although there were times when the flow fell short....this is definetly a great poem...keep up the good work your doing awsome!! 5/5:)