I said no to love

by elmahdy   Oct 5, 2007


She is cute, she is funny
she was a friend i never thought more
until she came holding her heart
offering real love to someone who isn' hers
all i said was sorry my friend.
i can't go on i can't do it
i heard the sound of cracking heart
listened to her tears falling to the ground
while she was walking away
the sound of rain took over the scene
is it the sky crying for her??
did i lose a best friend
now i know she will hate me
as much as the sand moistened by this rain
i did do hurt somebody i really respect
i can't believe i broke her heart

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  • 17 years ago

    by JustKristina

    O.O.o. this is my favorite one yet... i freaking love this! i had tears in my eyes... it was soo good.. you are super talented... you are amazing these are my favorite lines :
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    until she came holding her heart
    offering real love to someone who isn't hers

    great work on this one! you know i'm a fan!!!

    <<Kristina>> :o]

  • 17 years ago

    by oOoPrInCeSsoOo

    Very touched poem..full with emotions
    really good work :)