Dream

by Million Tears   May 4, 2004


This is another poem for Inna. It may not be good but i always put all of my heart into the poems i write for her.

Everyday I wake up only to find myself still asleep in this nightmare...

*~@Dream@~*

Hey there Inna I had this dream,
I thought it was the funniest thing.
I had this dream you broke my heart,
Without a care you tore it apart.
The pain was all too real,
Your love I could not feel.
But I knew this could not be true,
Cause I said that I loved you.
In this dream you went away,
It haunted me every single day.
Everything changed in a single call,
You disappeared and I lost it all.
"I think we should see each other less,"
My heart was ripped out of my chest.
You left me on the phone,
I cried alone.
Those eight words echoed through my head,
I could not believe the things you said.
A pain like that I could not define,
A way back I tried to find.
You acted like you did not care,
It almost fooled me when you were not there.
In my dream our love was dying,
Without warning you stopped trying.
It is like my nightmares came alive,
It felt like our love took a dive.
You were gone before my eyes,
I lost you cause of stupid lies.
My whole world fell to the ground,
Your love for me turned upside down.
I know you would never break my heart,
I know we would never be apart.
It burned me from the inside out,
It hurt so bad I wanted to shout.
You ruined my world without a care,
The site gave me quite a scare.
The pain I could not erase,
Your love I could not replace.
I thought it was kinda funny,
Cause I swear I thought you loved me.
But I am starting to think this is not a dream,
Living in a world of nightmarish things.
I am starting to get scared,
I think our loves impaired.
My love for you I will always keep,
Please wake me up,
I am still asleep.

~@Dedicated to the one I lost@~

Please comment or rate. also read my other poems. thanks for reading!

*~@8@~*

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  • 20 years ago

    by KeEzY

    GREAT POEM AND REALLY SAD

  • 20 years ago

    by TC

    that was nice, really wrote it from your heart, I know how that feels too, I wish I could help but I myself know whatever other ppl tell you to let go and ya will find a new girl, until you think for yourself and make up your own mind in the right time, until then it doesnt matter

    ya I went thru all this pain (and still am goin thru) with 8 words too... what a coincidence, eh? but they were different 8 words

    keep up the great work

  • 20 years ago

    by Kristina K

    Excellent piece of poetry. You have evidently put your emotions into this wonderful piece. I am sorry you had to go through this pain, however, I wish you all the best. Thank you for your kind words regarding my poem. I very much appreciate your comment. Keep up the excellent work and I look forward to reading more. Take care always
    Kristina

  • 20 years ago

    by Emilia

    Hi, It's Emilya writing, I really liked your poem.. You have tallent =)

    I gave you a 5

    *please check out my poems and comment and rate, It would mean a lot to me*

  • SORRY I KNOW IT HURTS IT WILL GET BETTER TIME WILL HEAL IT IT WAS A GOOD POEM I LIKED IT VERY MUCH KEEP ON WRITING LOVE MUCH
    HOLLY