Life and Love

by Dying Beautifully   Oct 6, 2007


It started with the boy named Keenan,
Who for the fear of pain came and then just left.
Keenan left this girl named Rebbeca,
Three months ago she again was single.

Then arrived the love of her life Connor,
Smiles and laughs are all the things he makes.
He took an interest and want for her,
She was "Amazing" and his "Most special".

Connor took this heart of hers Rebbeca,
And that's when this love came and starts.
Day by day talk by talk more she's loving,
Happiness arrives with thoughts of Connor.

So coms as you can see this great love from,
Which there used to be hatred and sorrow.

**This is in sonnet format but it's actually a poem that is a last words poem just re read it and you'll see** Enjoy:)

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  • 17 years ago

    by Corruption

    Good poem
    i wouldnt put names in it through
    sometimes it throws the flow off
    but you did an alright job
    glad to read it
    and thx for the comment

    Keenan

  • 17 years ago

    by Connor

    Good poem not to crazy about it being as u put it a "last words poem" but it's still a great poem good job!