ARGH! yeah, now that poem was really neat...
I exspecially loved
"Your lips are like morphine
Knocks me out whenever they touch me"

it flowed well, it all made sense, it was clear and obveous what you were saying...yeah dude, how did this poem get no comments? i loved it

This is why we all should stay off drugs. Lol...great poem.

Yeah!! love sometimes makes you feel so hooked and addicted that sometimes you wanted and wished to get rid of it but still don't know how.. and that's what i'm experiencing right now. and this poem, just clearly and perfectly pitcture out the right scene, the words (metaphors and simile) are nicely chosen really jives to the emotions.. great work!!

Great poem. Wonderfully written. I loved your choice of words and you expressed yourself beautifully. The flow was also flawless and the poems well put together.
Good job 5/5

Take Care!

-Shannon <3

Great poem.
well written.
i feel the same wayy everyday.

5/5.

Love is an addiction this is a great poem i love all the passion u put into this poem it makes it hard to stop reading

I love the way this poem starts it just flows and i love that .great poem.

I really like this one. =]

You honestly left me speechless @ the end...the flow was truly amazing & it just flowed so smooth...I could feel everything you felt by the vividness of it....AMAZING write!

Brooke<3

That was really good keep up the great work