Wow. This is an amazing poem. I understand it, but I don't, oh well, at least it kept me intrigued. I love the repetition of that one stanza, and the title fits perfectly. :D Thank-you so much for commenting on my poem.

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You're poems great! i feel the same way sometimes. feeling like you need to let something out but you can't find the word to say. From one beginer to another your poem is great. KEEP'M COMIN'! *Twiggy*

Wow this is a sad poem. i don't no really what to say on it though. its difficult to describe. but keep writing. what inspired it?

Ii REALLY ENJOYED READiiNG THiiS POEM. ii FEEL THE SAME WAY A LOT OF THE TiiME. ii LOVED THE REPiiTiiTiiON AND THE WAY iiT FLOWED. GREAT JOB!

It was so deep
and the repeating just amplifies the emotion your trying to put. and as you did so well
very nice flow throughout.
5/5 keep writing =P

This is surely one of its kind. have never read anything like this, its so unique. Full of sadness yet could keep every reader on the edge of a seat. Beautiful words indeed.
Loved the repeatation of stanza.

Great poem

all the best and take care