Just a Paper in my File

by Shokry Al Qubati   Oct 6, 2007


It was a year
It was the best when I lived there
I saw her near
And she was getting so fair
I said, "You Girl!"
As if she was just a girl
She said, "Yes sir!"
I gazed at her and said, " You're rare!"
She looked downward
She said no word
After a while
I woke up and angrily smiled
I realized she was Just a Paper in my File

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  • 15 years ago

    by KemistryKia

    I loved how it took you on a ride and i had to guess what was next...beautiful
    keep writing

  • 15 years ago

    by Heba

    Wow,so touching and really beautiful...

    Welldone.5\5...

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    This is very good once again. Talented rhymer :)
    i like that the poem was written simply, but the idea of the poem was not simple.. it had a twist. So awesome work.
    i dont know if what i just said made sense.. so if you understood it, i congratulate you.. hehe.

    :]

  • 15 years ago

    by La Muse Angelique

    Lovely poem, i'm sad you only have one sad poem!.. you should write some more! lol :)
    Thank you for your comment on my work it's very much appreciated.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Wondering Soul

    Very unique I like the way you write so short and mysterious thankyou for all the comments on my poems.

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