I Submit; I Deny!

I like every single rhymes you compose

I like every single rhymes you compose

Sorry I have to disagree with the previous comments given to you, I think that this poem is pretty childish.I don't know why you like to put '!' at the end of some of the sentences. Almost majority of the words are repeated in your previous poems. It's just to predictable on what rhyme is going to be in the next sentence.

She is the Moon?! I Submit; I Deny!

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This doesn't make sense at all, what do you mean, by you submit then you deny?Seems like you are contradicting yourself.

Well then again I guess it's forgivable as English is not your main language.

No hard feelings, but the truth is, I can tell you all the beautiful lies you want to hear but it would only let you write within your own comfort zone, cause nobody dares to tell you that this piece it no where near a 3rd grade standard.

Very nice poem

Wow, it's amazing how a short poem managed to bring across such strong emotions. Commendable effort!