This Poem Is Something That All Of Us Can Relate To In A Way...It Just Screamed With Emotions && Was Beautifully Written!

Brooke<3

This poem has so much in it, it's not even funny, for real. 5/5

This poem is amazing. It actually has something alot of people can relate too!! I love this one too!!! 5/5

You are so right.
our world is corrupted enough
without this unnecessary war.
itz pointless. && stupid.
why did bush get elected again anyway.
i personally think that the warr is inconvenient
&& is costing too many lives. && too much money.
i think that all of this coul'dve been prevented.
ughh.. i completely agree with you.

5/5.

Hey man. that was really good. i loved it but then again i pretty much always love your poems. you are such an amazing writer.

Needless to say, many people feel this way. I know I do. You show truth without fault here and it just flows so magnificently! 5/5

Oops. I forgot I did this already.

Your passion is so obvious! if only more people would say how they truly feel, and if only people would listen! war is not the answer it only leaves questions. really well written, fight for whats right!

That poem is awsome:)
theres flow to it and stuff

Its great

Tho i'm normally pro war, i do agree that this war is unnecessary. i completely feel you man. 5/5