Hard not to smile

by NearlyCrazy6   Oct 6, 2007


My heart is shining bright
It's hard not to smile
I now see a beautiful light
From the darkness that was there for a while

I finally get to speak with him
He is so special to me
It's like my heart is a tree that has gained back its limb
Now my blind hope filled eyes CAN see

*if you don't get the last line, read my other poem called "Blind hope filled eyes"*

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Well you started off good but personally I think it would have been better if you would've kept going try not to stop on emotions like that but it was a good poem the only thing I would consider revising was the second to last line but otherwise good work
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by 4 track demo

    Sincerely, soothing, and soft,
    thanks for the read....

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