Comments : Hard not to smile

  • 17 years ago

    by 4 track demo

    Sincerely, soothing, and soft,
    thanks for the read....

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Well you started off good but personally I think it would have been better if you would've kept going try not to stop on emotions like that but it was a good poem the only thing I would consider revising was the second to last line but otherwise good work
    5/5