Wow, this is really good.
Very twisted, but very good.
Always,
Charlotte.

Wow... I' completely breathless... This piece is mind- blowing, so powerful and filled with excellent metaphors and secret meanings. The imagery in it is twisted, but so unique and effective. I like this poem from the beginning to the end, it's brilliant and totally amazing. I can't pick my favorite part, each stanza is equally great.
Keep writing, so are truly talented!
5/5 from me

Wow..this took my breath away...this peice totaly made my mind go crazy{in a good way} this is filled with so much immagery and its twisted but good