Faith Saves

Very cool, though I do believe if you were to keep with the seemingly intended syllable count, then "Veiled by" should have one more syllable. "Veiled" is only one after all.
I liked this write. I felt like I knew where you were going and the word choices were excellent until I got here:
Veiled by
Envy's
Stare.

At which point I felt like I was missing something. I couldn't quite understand what you were getting at. Envy of what? Anyway, that could be me being a terrible analyzer of poetry! Or you did what a lot of poets do... and wrote something because it sounds cool, not because it has meaning.
Only you know which it is.

Another good write!

Great piece, very deep and excellently written, I like it from the beginning to the end. Whole poem is simply breathtaking, it really make me think.
Keep up!
5/5 from me

I echo Sunny`s sentiments on this piece, the flow was incredible and well written. Timothy r