Hi,
firstly i'm sorry you had to lose the one you love,
i know how it feels to i lost the one i love many of my poems are about him,
the pain never goes away but you get used to it i'm still not used to it it's only been 11 months for me,
this poem was beautly written you're emotions behind every word,
it's great that you write you're emotions down as it helps put things into order
this was a great poem i gave you a 5 if u ever want to contact me my add is on my profile
take care
lorna
xxx

another awesome one...i'm sorry if it's true