Johnny Got His Gun

by Wake   Oct 7, 2007


***Back in the 70's .. a movie was made , adapted from Dalton Trumbo's novel
-Johnny Got His Gun-
... it was about a soldier who was hit by a mortar bomb ,leaving him a quadruple amputee who has lost his arms, legs, eyes, ears, mouth and nose.He lies strapped to a hospital bed in a fate worse than death..unable to distinguish if he's awake or asleep ..

This here, is a little piece i tried writing on it. ^^''.. ***

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Day after day,
slowly falls away
another part of me.
But still the same

I bleed and I bleed,
It threads and it threads.
In a labyrinth of darkness,
endlessly it spreads.

Everyone can see,
everyone does know.
Fallen yet undying,
here all alone.

Don't lay beside me
if you cant stay through my eternity
and here what my mind speaks
as my thoughts turn desultory.

A halo of darkness,
just above the bright ground
forfeiting every endeavor
i forever lie down.

If i had a voice , I'd Keep myself company
If i had legs , I'd run away
If i had arms , I'd kill myself
If i could know I'm asleep, I'd have dreams and be lost in their way.

So wring my breath
as i wish for death.
Someone wring my breath
'cause i wish for death.

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Written by Wake

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  • 16 years ago

    by Katelyn

    This is my aboslute favorite poem ever written by you. reading it once doesn't cut it. everytime i look at your profile, i have to find this poem and read it. theres a lot of power inside thats so deep it's hard to explain the feelings brought out by this one.

    GREAT JOB!!!

    .:Katelyn:.

  • 17 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    An amazing. emotional poem. 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Nandiix3

    Wow...That was very moving. Keep writing.<3

  • 17 years ago

    by chavii

    A superbly written poem, you have captured the pain and frustration of soldier very well.Impressive poem.

    Chavii.

  • 17 years ago

    by Of Sweet Insanity

    The ending was so haunting and this was pretty scary to read. I can't imagine life like that.........................................
    I have to read it again!
    It's AMAZING.
    ~!~ VaNiLLa PaiN ~!~